In this nod to film noir, a distraught husband visits his close friend for advice about his unfaithful wife.
at first i thought, that franco would try to set up doc as the murderer because of the weapon you foreshadowed, but it works nonetheless
Franco (the author's self insert) just doesn't have enough brain for that!
Yeah, He (not the author) seems like he is not the brightest
This reminds me of “pretty mouth, and green my eyes,” by JD Salinger, in a very indirect way. Gripping read!
A bit hard-boiled, innit?
Just the way I like it
at first i thought, that franco would try to set up doc as the murderer because of the weapon you foreshadowed, but it works nonetheless
Franco (the author's self insert) just doesn't have enough brain for that!
Yeah, He (not the author) seems like he is not the brightest
This reminds me of “pretty mouth, and green my eyes,” by JD Salinger, in a very indirect way. Gripping read!
A bit hard-boiled, innit?
Just the way I like it