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Jonas's avatar

at first i thought, that franco would try to set up doc as the murderer because of the weapon you foreshadowed, but it works nonetheless

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Miles MacNaughton's avatar

Franco (the author's self insert) just doesn't have enough brain for that!

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Jonas's avatar

Yeah, He (not the author) seems like he is not the brightest

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Cole Noble's avatar

This reminds me of “pretty mouth, and green my eyes,” by JD Salinger, in a very indirect way. Gripping read!

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Alexander T. Palacios's avatar

A bit hard-boiled, innit?

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Miles MacNaughton's avatar

Just the way I like it

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